해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
This picture was taken in an office.
There are several people in the picture.
All of them are wearing formal suits.
In the middle, there is a man holding some documents. a paper.
Next to him, there is a woman holding a cup.
wearing a suit.
In the background, there are two more people standing.
and I can see a desk and a chair.
It seems like they are busy on their work.
-> 그림에 대해 잘 묘사해 주셨지만 조금 더 구체적으로 묘사해 주신다면 좋은 점수를 받으실 수 있을 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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