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첨삭지기 | 2025.07.13 | 조회 42


I am 26 years old and I live in Goyang with my parents and an our cat in a house located in Goyang. The house has We live in a house with three rooms, which is more than enough for the three of us. I like living there because it’s quiet and cozy.

I work as a product manager at a home appliance company. I spend most of my time at work Most of my job involves analyzing products and planning marketing strategies our products and planning how to market them based on those insights. I’m responsible for the entire marketing process of one of our main products,  Since I’m in charge of the entire marketing process for one of our main products, So, it can be a bit stressful at times. sometimes.

When I want to have some fun, I watch In my free time, I enjoy watching gaming videos on YouTube. Just lying down and watching something fun really helps me recharge.

As for my personality, I tend to be a bit introverted. I prefer listening to people others rather than doing the talk talking a lot myself.

In the future, I hope to work for a company related to the food industry, especially in marketing. That’s why I’m currently looking into various at different companies and getting ready to make a career move.


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