해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
There is a picture taken at an office.
This picture was taken in an office.
There are four people in this picture.
The guy who there is a man wearing with a gray suit suits is holding some documents. a paper.
Next to him, the there is a woman looking at the documents this paper and talking to him. smiling.
They are wearing a suit and white Y-shirt.
In the background of the picture, there are two other people standing.
-> 그림에 대한 묘사가 부족합니다. 또한 문법적 오류가 많아 전반적인 수정이 필요했습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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