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Yes, I go to restaurants outside twice a week.
Let me explain in more detail. give the details of things.
First of all, I don’t like cooking want to cook at home.
Because when I cook at home my home is getting it makes my house dirty.
Second, I enjoy eating food from restaurants. like to eat outside food.
These are the reasons why I prefer eating outside. think so.
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※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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