해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
I often go to restaurants outside this neighborhood.
Because I can try a variety of dishes experience various menus from outside from my neighborhood.
And secondly, I enjoy experiencing can experience new things through those from that various new menus.
And lastly, I can hang out burn with my friends eating delicious foods. from outside this neighborhood.
That’s why I usually go to restaurants outside this neighborhood.
-> 다소 어색한 문장이 많아 전반적인 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.





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