8/3 토스 파트5 첨삭부탁드리겠습니다 (오프토픽 여부)
1. I agree that employees ~~
2. Most of all many employees get much stressed
3. So the can’t focus on their work
4. For example, when i was in high school, i had to study hard
5. So i got much stressed
6. But my teacher gave me a solution
7. It is helpful for me so i could focus on my studies
8. As a result i could get good grades at school, and i was interested in studying.
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