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RE:8/3 part5 문제 답변 첨삭 답변드립니다.
첨삭지기 | 2025.08.03 | 조회 29

I agree with the statement.

Let me explain why I think this way.

Most First of all, people can work more efficiently and productively.

and they can communicate with other people better with others

 

also, In addition, having a good sense of humor helps people become better team players

and creates a more positive work environment.

they can be a g.o.od team player. and make a g.o.od work environment

if they have a g.o.o.d sense of humor.

According to a recent news report, a majority of Korean officers office workers said that

employees should have a good  g.o.od sense of humor, as it helps them work more because they can work efficiently and productively.

therefore, I believe having a good sense of humor is important in the workplace. I think this way.


-> 질문을 잘 파악하셨지만 다소 어색한 문장이 많아 자연스럽게 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.

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