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해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.


Yes, It is better to exercise in a gym with equipment.

Let me explain why I think this way.

First, Exercising in a gym with equipment 

gives the motivation to people 

In my experience, 

I also exercise in the gym and I always get a motivation to other people everytime I exercise in the gym.

And also I can use the equipment in a gym for free.

It’s is really convenient and useful 

Second, according to the recent news the article, The majority of people said that exercising in a majority gym with equipment is effective.

Therefore, I think it is better to exercise in a gym with equipment.


※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.

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