해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
This is a picture taken indoors.
The first thing I can see from this picture is that four people working on in an office.
Some Two of them is are talking about the documents he is holding. with a paper.
And rest of them is are watching looking at them who is talking with a paper
Plus in the background of the picture, i can see a black chair and a laptop.
-> 그림에 대해 충분히 묘사해 주셨지만 사소한 실수가 많이 발견되어 전반적인 수정이 필요했습니다.
수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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