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I think it is better to exercise outdoors.

Let me explain why I think this way.

Most First of all, a gym membership registration’s fee is too expensive.

From my experience, it was do so costly that expensive.

So I couldn’t save any money.

Second, exercising outdoors saves time. I can save time.

The nearest gym is not close to my house, and it takes about an hour by bus to get there.

It’s because there is a gym not near my home.

I can get there by bus in one hour.

->  질문에 대한 답변에 어색한 부분이 많아 수정이 필요했습니다. 조금 더 완벽한 문장을 구사하신다면 좋은 점수를 받으실 수 있을 것 같습니다.

수고하셨습니다.

※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.