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I think it’s better to exercise in a gym with equipment.

Let me explain why I think this way side.

I agree like at gym with equipment.

Because in this season the weather is very hot,

But the gym has air conditioning, who makes it more comfortable.

I want to cold air, but this season is very hot.

Gym has air conditioners, so I want to this condition.

So, therefore I agree with this statement .

And Also, I want to exercise like exercising with equipment, and the gym has plenty of it, while outdoor does not.

so gym has many equipment, but Exercise outdoors is not.

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