해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
This is a picture taken at in an office.
The first thing I can see from this picture is two people standing and talking to each other.
They are looking at some papers and wearing suits.
In front of them there is a print machine.
And in the background of the picture, I can see two other people standing.
And there are some chairs and tables too and people.
-> 질문에 대한 답변을 잘 작성해주셨지만 조금 더 자연스러운 수정이 필요했습니다.
수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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