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전*진 | 2025.09.29 | 조회 27

해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 9번 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.


I think it is better to exercise in a gym with equipment.

Let me explain why I think in this way.

First in my experience, I usually exercise in a gym with equipment.

I think this way is better than exercise outdoors 

Because it’s more easier and convenient than outdoors 

and also, I was really worried about with other people.


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