해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 9번 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
I think it is better to exercise in a gym with equipment.
Let me explain why I think in this way.
First, from in my experience, I usually exercise in a gym with equipment, and I find it
I think this way is better than exercising outdoors
This is because it’s more easier and more convenient, than outdoors
and also, I don’t have to worry was really worried about others watching me. with other people.
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