해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 9번 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
I think it is better to exercise outdoors.
Because It has fresh air because I’m sorry.
For example, If you hike at the mountain,
You can smell the fresh air outside.
So, Fresh air gives you the energy.
So, it is kind of good reason.
And second reason is some kinds of the…
Sorry, No more reason. Just the fresh air.
I think it is better to exercise outside.
I think it’s better to exercise outdoors because the air is fresh.
For example, if you go hiking in the mountains,
you can really feel and smell the fresh air.
It gives you energy and makes you feel good.
So, that’s why I think exercising outdoors is better.
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