해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 9번 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
This picture was taken in the an office.
What I can notice first
There are four people in this picture.
All of them are wearing formal suits.
The first thing I notice is a man and a woman in the center discussing something while looking at the some papers.
Behind them, there are two people walking towards them.
In the front there is a printer.
Overall, It the atmosphere looks like peaceful.
-> 조금 더 완벽한 문장으로, 구체적인 묘사가 이루어져야 할 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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