해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 9번 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
This is the picture was taken at in a park.
The first thing I can see from this picture is two people.
she A woman is kneeling down in front of the a standing child.
The child is probably her son. are maybe she’s sun.
And she is helping him put on a her sons wearing helmet.
Overall, It seems like they are
In the background of the picture, there is a bicycle lying on the ground.
-> 그림에 대한 구체적인 묘사가 필요합니다. 또한 어색한 부분이 많아 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
- ※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.





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