해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 9번 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
I think this picture was taken in an office.
What I noticed first is two people wearing business suits, and they are talking to each other together.
And I can also see noticed a man holding a some papers.
In the background, Some people are standing shoulder to shoulder.
Overall, It looks like appears to be a busy office scene.
-> 그림에 대해 잘 묘사해주셨지만 조금 더 자연스러운 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.





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