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RE:첨삭 답변드립니다.
첨삭지기 | 2025.10.24 | 조회 42
She works an office job from home.  
Sometimes she has to show her ID to buy a cigarettes. 
She is very upright and always conscientiously. 
She also has a gife gift for drawing. 
Her paintings was were exhibited at an exhibition recently. 
We live for apart now, but we still keep in touch often and hang out whenever we can. 
She is conscientious sincere and thoughtful in all her relationships. 
She is innocent like a child, and She finds inspiration in the beauty of everyday life, and express expressing it through her paintings artwork.
Many people, including myself, are moved touched by her childlike paintings. 
Her paintings art always inspires me and cleanse clears my mind.

-> 질문에 대한 답변을 잘 작성해 주셨지만 사소한 실수와 어색한 곳이 발견되어 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
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