해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 9번 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
Yes, I often go to restaurants outside this neighborhood.
Because I don’t want to cook.
Because These days, I don’t have much time, even though now days.
my working work is getting easier busier day by day.
So, I don’t want to cook and I don’t want to wash dishes.
I just don’t feel like cooking or doing the dishes.
It’s such a hassle, so that’s why I often go to restaurants outside this neighborhood.
-> 답변을 잘 작성해 주셨지만 어색하거나 문맥에서 벗어난 문장이 있어 조금 더 자연스럽게 수정했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.





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