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첨삭지기 | 2025.11.04 | 조회 46
1. 사무실이나 일터 묘사 

 

I am working work in my own room, which I use as my office. like office. So my office It is quiet and cozy since there are no other employees. small. There arent any employees.

There are is a bookshelf bookself, a desk, and a chair for each in my office. I also have a laptop that I use for teaching my classes. for teaching class.

On the backside, there is a closet.

At the back of the room, there’s a small closet.


2. 사무실에서 사용하는 기기와 장비

I am working at work for an education company that My company is known for focuses on teaching students. so That’s why there are many kinds of books in my office.

I am in charge of online English classes teacher, So I make often use of the a webcam to see mt students’s faces on the screen while I teach. camera in my office. I use it to see students face in front of the computer screen.


3. 점심시간에 하는 일 

During my lunch break, I usually eat lunch while watching TV.

If I come back to the office early, I often check review my class materials.

There are some snacks in my office, so I can eat them whenever I want.

If there’s nothing to do, I like to watch a short videos.

My office is quiet, so it is easy to rest relax during my lunch break.


-> 문장을 구사하실 때 다소 어색한 부분이 발견되어 수정이 필요했습니다. 조금 더 완벽한 문장을 구사해 주신다면 좋은 점수를 받으실 수 있을 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.

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