해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
Obviously, I don’t I’m not go out very much to outside much.
because I’m a student and So, My budget is very tight.
Therefore And So, I need to save my money.
And I like to cook in my house.
So, I like to cook at home, so usually prepare my own meals and eat at home. eat my meals at my house and cook by myself.
-> 질문을 잘 파악하셨지만 어색한 문장이 많아 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.





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