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I think that it is better to exercise outdoors.

I can say of give a couple of reasons for this.

Because First, It can attracts many people of all ages, for young to old including me.

There is no one who thislike Almost everyone enjoys exercising outdoors.

And Also, One of my hobbies My hobby is riding a motorcycle, so Exercise outdoors activities help can relieve my stress and I really enjoy them it.

For these reasons, I believe exercising outdoors is better.

So, I think it is better to exercise outdoors.

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