해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
There are lots of fun places in my hometown. First of all, there is a beach with a beautiful landscape, so I always often visit there. and There are a lot of also many theaters and karaokes in the downtown, so I can usually visit there with my friends to have fun. And In addition, there are also lots of good restaurants with plenty of great seafood restaurants, so I can enjoy all kinds of delicious food. of them.
-> 질문을 잘 파악해 주셨지만 조금 어색한 부분이 발견되어 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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