해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
I often go to restaurants outside this neighborhood.
Especially, I usually go to much favorite restaurants.
I go to that restaurants once a week with my mom there one per one week with my mom because there are They have vegan food. because My mom is vegetarian, so that there is it was a good place for both of us. me and my mom because I love something I like foods like salmon and bacon, but my mom doesn't like it. But there are They had mushroom bread for her and also salmon bread for me, so I... we were both satisfied.
-> 자신의 생각을 잘 표현해 주셨지만 문장에 어색한 부분이 많이 발견되어 전반적인 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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