해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
This picture was taken at a park. where firstly At first, I can see two people. and A woman is kneeling down on the ground and she is securing a kid child’s helmet. and she is has a smile on her face,. and a kid The child is standing and kid has wearing a yellow helmet. on his head, Overall, it looks like peaceful.
-> 주어진 그림에 대한 묘사를 잘 해주셨지만 다소 어색한 부분이 발견되어 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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