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해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.

I think this picture was taken in the a garden. What I notice first is that there are two people in the garden. two people are in a garden. On the left side of the picture, a man wearing with a green T-shirt is holding grabbing a yellow flowers to plant it, and on the right side of the picture, a woman with in a blue T-shirt is helping him the man. Generally, I think it seems to be peaceful.

-> 주어진 그림에 대해 잘 묘사해 주셨지만 어색한 부분이 많이 발견되어 수정이 필요했습니다.

※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.