해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
This is a picture was taken at a park. There are two people in this picture. In the middle of the picture, I can see a bike lying on the ground. On the left side of the picture, I can see a woman and a boy. She is tying helping a young boy put on his helmet. In the background of the picture, I can see there are some trees and grass. Overall, I can see it looks like a peaceful day.
-> 다소 어색한 부분이 발견되어 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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