해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
This picture is was taken in an office.
There are four people in this picture and They are all wearing suit, a dark suits,
and there is I can see a man and a woman looking at a some documents. and They are talking to each other in front of a copy machine. an office gadget. A The man is holding a paper, holding some papers, the documents and a the woman is holding a cup.
In the background of the picture, two more people are standing.
-> 전반적으로 그림 묘사가 부족해 추가와 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.





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