해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
I think this picture was taken in an office. There are four people in this picture. In the middle of the picture, a man is reading holding some documents. He is wearing a gray suit. Next to her, next to him, a woman is looking at to documents and talking to him. She is wearing a black jacket and a white shirt.
In the background, I can see two other people standing.
-> 어색한 부분이 발견되어 조금 더 자연스럽게 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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