해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
This picture is was taken at a garden. The first thing that I can find notice in this picture is two elderlies. elderly people. On the left side of the picture, there is one a man who is wearing a green shirt, and on the right side, there is a woman who is wearing a blue shirt. Also, in the background of the picture, there's are lots of tools that can be used for gardening on garden.
-> 묘사를 잘 해주셨지만 사소한 실수가 발견되어 수정이 필요했습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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