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RE:첨삭 답변드립니다.
첨삭지기 | 2026.03.12 | 조회 21

I’m heading to Toronto for six months to truly improve my master English. My goal is to break out of my shell and speak comfortably with everyone I meet. I wanna reach a goal level where I can express myself freely and confidently. / Right now, I’m preparing as much as possible in Korea so I can hit the ground running as soon as the moment I arrive in Canada.

Many people assume that six months abroad is enough to speak English naturally, but I don’t completely agree disagree. I believe I need to live and breathe the language while putting in consistent personal effort. I wanna make every moment count and truly get my money’s worth.


That’s why I think believe that while studying abroad provides an optimal a great environment for running English, relying solely on that environment—without determination and hard work—makes However, relying only on the environment without determination and hard work would make it nothing more than an expensive trip. While understanding the culture is valuable, my main goal is to constantly actively speak up and interact with native speakers as much as possible. Instead of getting hung up on worrying about perfect grammar, I will choose the confidence to just go for it. focus on speaking confidently and just going for it. Even if I make mistakes, I know that believe this attitude will help me improve the most. is what will truly drive my growth.


-> 답변을 잘 해주셨지만 부자연스러운 부분이 많아 발견되어 전반적인 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.

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