해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
Yes, I really often go to restaurants outside this neighborhood. That's because I really like to have enjoy having meals outdoors. I mean, In particular, I really like to going to the restaurants with my family, with my wife and my eight-year-old son. And I think that if I have a meal out there outdoors, I can When we eat out, we can have good conversations there, and we can also enjoy delicious food together good meal, and I think that it's a really good for building up. great way to strengthen our family bond.
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