해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
This picture is was taken in an office. There are four people in this picture. All of them are wearing formal clothes. The first thing I can see in this picture is a man and a woman. All of them are wearing casual clothes. The man is holding a document some documents and she the woman is holding a cup. They are looking at the documents. In the background of the picture, I can see a man and a woman another man and woman watching them.
-> 주어진 그림에 대해 잘 묘사해주셨지만 어색한 부분이 있어 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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