해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
This picture was taken in a garden. There are two people in this picture. They are planting flowers on the in pots. The man is wearing a green T-shirt, and he has gray hair. The woman is wearing a hat. Next to them, there is are many gardening supplies, and in the background, I can see many plants of and trees. Overall, it looks like they are taking care of their garden. gardening their pots.
-> 그림에 대해 잘 묘사해 주셨지만 사소한 실수가 많이 발견되어 전반적인 수정이 필요했습니다. 감사합니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다




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