해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
I think this picture was taken outdoors. on the ground. And there are two people, and they looks like a married couple marrige person each other, marriage each other, each other. On the left side, they seem to be planting flowers in pots. are, I think they are trying to make a plant. In the background, there are some gardening tools and a mountain. mountains.
-> 그림에 대해 조금 더 구체적인 묘사가 필요할 것 같습니다. 또한 문법적 오류가 많이 발견되어 전반적인 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다
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