해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
Because once a week, because it is so delicious and very nearby my house, so I can go easy once a week.
I often go to restaurants outside my neighborhood.
I usually go once a week.
The reason is that there are many different and delicious restaurants around my area, so I enjoy trying them.
-> 어색한 부분이 많아 전반적인 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다
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