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Yes, I often go to restaurants outside this neighborhood. It's because my house is near about the restaurant, and the menu there are many restaurants near my house. Also, the food is cheap, so because Since I'm a high school student so I have no money, so I frequently, I often go to the restaurant. and don’t have much money, I usually go to affordable restaurants frequently.
-> 질문을 잘 파악하셨지만 어색한 부분이 많이 발견되어 전반적인 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
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