해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
I think it is better to exercise outdoors most of all. It is less crowded outside outdoors, so I can exercise in a more comfortable atmosphere. Actually, about two weeks ago, I exercised outdoors, At the time, and it was a very really great experience because I could concentrate better on my exercise, workout. so As a result, I was able to reduce my relieve a lot of stress. Therefore, I think it is better to exercising outdoors is better.
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