해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
This picture is was taken in the hallway of the an office. On the left side of the photo, I can see the a chair, and on the desk there is in a laptop on the desk. On the right side, there is a copy machine, and in front of it the copy machine, there are a man and a woman. The man is wearing a gray suit, and the woman is wearing a black suit, and holding a cup of coffee.
-> 주어진 그림에대한 묘사를 잘 해주셨지만 어색한 부분이 있어 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다
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