해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
I think this picture was taken in an office. what i noticed first is that there are four people in this picture the middle.In the middle of the picture, a man is standing next to a printer around the printer and holding some papers. And A woman is standing nearby and holding a cup. The people seem to be working together in a comfortable office environment.
-> 주어진 그림에 대한 조금 더 구체적인 묘사가 이루어져야 할 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다
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