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I think it's better than the exercise outdoor exercising outdoors is bette because it's not boring and they have some, the environment is keep changing and they make me more happy and sometimes it makes me gloomy, but that's not bad and this makes me feel better, so I think, I think that is good. The scenery is always changing, which makes exercising more enjoyable. Sometimes the weather can make me feel a little gloomy, but that’s not necessarily a bad thing. Being outdoors helps me feel refreshed and improves my mood. That’s why I think outdoor exercise is better.

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