해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
This picture was taken at in a garden. On the left side of the picture, a man who has white hair is working in a garden. an elderly man with white hair is gardening. Next to him, there is a woman who is wearing a hat, is helping to his husband. On wearing a hat is helping him. They seem to be planting flowers together. In the background of the picture, there are some garden tools on the grass. I can see some gardening tools on the grass. Overall, it looks like a peaceful and pleasant day outdoors.
-> 주어진 그림에 대한 조금 더 구체적인 묘사가 이루어져야 할 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다
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