해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
The woman with wearing blue shirt and hat, and the man with wearing green shirt, they are planting some flowers in their garden. And at behind, there are many trees and plants and mountain.
A woman wearing a blue shirt and a hat and a man wearing a green shirt are planting flowers in their garden. In the background, there are many trees, plants, and mountains.
-> 어색한 부분이 많이 발견되어 전반적인 수정이 필요했습니다.
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