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Yes, I often go to restaurants outside my neighborhood. It's because, um, I can experience various restaurants outside my neighborhood. This is very enjoyable to me.
I enjoy trying different kinds of food and experiencing new restaurants. It’s always exciting for me to explore places I haven’t visited before.
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