해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
The first thing that I can see in this picture is two people standing in front of the a printer. I think the man having with a beard is trying to print something out something. He's holding some documents. and Next to him, there is a woman wearing a suit, just like the a man she is holding a cup. This picture is was taken at in an office. Also, two other people are looking at them.
-> 조금 더 자연스럽게 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다
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