해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
I think this picture was taken at a garden. The first thing I can see is two people wearing gloves. On the left side of the picture, there is a man has gray with short gray hair. and he is wearing a green t-shirt. On the right side of the picture, there is a woman is wearing a hat and a blue t-shirt. In the background of the picture, I can see many trees and some gardening tools.
-> 그림에 대한 묘사를 잘 해주셨지만 사소한 실수가 발견되어 수정이 필요했습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다
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