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I really like to go outside this neighborhood, but I couldn't. I do not go, I do not often go to the restaurant outside this neighborhood because I am a student, I don’t often go to restaurants outside my neighborhood because I am a college student. so I don't have enough time and or money to spend on them. eat out very often. So, I usually cook in my dormitory instead. and I sometimes go to the restaurant, like a special day. However, on special occasions, I sometimes go to a nice restaurant with my friends.
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