해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
This picture was taken in an office. There are some four people in the picture. In the middle, a man is showing some documents to a woman. The woman is listening to his explanation. In the background, two people are standing. They are wearing formal clothes. In the background, there is an empty room. The office looks clean and organized, and there is some empty space in the background.
-> 전반적으로 묘사를 잘 해주셨지만 주어진 시간 안에 조금 더 구체적인 묘사를 해주신다면 좋은 점수를 받으실 수 있을 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다
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