해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
This Picture is was taken at the in a garden. Well, I can see a man wearing a green T-shirt is planting a some flowers in the pots. next to him, I can see an old woman wearing a blue T-shirt and a hat. She is also planting a flower. flowers. Behind them, I can see trees full of leaves and there is a mountain. there are many trees full of green leaves, and I can also see a mountain in the distance. Everyone looks peaceful and happy, and the weather is moderate. seems nice.
-> 주어진 그림에 대한 묘사를 잘 해주셨지만 어색한 부분이 발견되어 수정이 필요했습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다
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